Ooh... Owen apologising. That was great because it's nice not to see him completely vilified. I also liked how Rose saw Gwen:

When you're up to it, I'll take you out and we'll have a proper girls' day. Maybe even get our hair done, go to the spa, get facials."

Rose couldn't help but smile, the woman's delight was so infectious.

That section managed to get across a lot about Gwen and who she is in just a few sentences. Lovely. :-)

The interaction between Rose and Jack was pretty awesome, the gentle flirting as well as how much he's looking after her.

The Weevil thing was very curious, I'm guessing something to do with the void, but it's all a bit sinister really!

Looking forward to the next chapter!