Beautifully done. I particularly liked the "Dying yes, resting, no." Also the way you brought out the irony that it was a Family that robbed him of his chance to have exactly that - a family. I felt that was a factor behind the unusually cruel punishments he chose for them.
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Date: 2007-06-06 03:09 pm (UTC)