Date: 2007-06-21 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenmorrioghan.livejournal.com
This is fantastic. Love how you built on Utopia by fleshing out Jack's story. It all flows so well. In particular, IV 2007, connects everything together beautifully -- it brings that hug into perspective, and adds power to that moment. :)
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