ext_23768 ([identity profile] wendymr.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aibhinn_fics 2007-06-21 01:01 am (UTC)

Oh, wow. I'm glad I read this again, because you've added in quite a lot, haven't you? That final scene, for example, with the Doctor's lovely line about immortal friends. And this, from the reunion scene:

He'd seen that look many times, after all: the look of one bereft of one's soul-mate. He'd worn it himself.

Two men, bereft of their love…who just happened to be the same woman. Perhaps that was enough to re-create the bond between them, Jack thought, despite his immortality. Perhaps.


Gorgeous. As are the scenes where he's watching Rose, and the 2007 one where he thinks she's died. *hugs Jack*

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