Drabble: Like Father, Like Son

[aibhinn_fics]

Title: Like Father, Like Son
Author: aibhinn
Word Count: 100, according to Word for Windows
Characters: Jack, Rose, Ten, OMC
Pairing: Jack/Rose/Ten
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Summary: Getting his memories back might give Jack more than he bargained for.
Author's note: Just a little something that occurred to me. It might become part of a later fic; it might not.


Jack watched the boy—Dennis—go past with his friends, his heart in his throat. The way Dennis moved—the way he laughed—the tilt of his head—

Rose squeezed his hand in comfort. The Doctor stepped closer, pressing his suit-jacketed shoulder against Jack's. Neither spoke.

At last Jack broke the silence. "He has my eyes," he said.

A young girl, spotty and painfully shy, tried to edge around the group of boys. Dennis noticed, and with Jack's trademark grin, opened the door for her. She blushed as she went through.

Rose smiled. "He has your heart, too," she said.

Comments

[bytheseaside.livejournal.com]

Aww, that is just so cute!

[nohara-megami.livejournal.com]

"He has your heart, too,"
This so made my heart melt.

[dave7.livejournal.com]

I avoid OT3 like the plague don't normally read OT3, but I figured... it's a drabble, and it's by you and I'm not at all disappointed that I made an exception. This is fantastic. :)

[dameruth.livejournal.com]

Now it's my turn to say, "Oh, Jack . . .!" Aaaaaww!

[mrs-cj-harkness.livejournal.com]

Rose smiled. "He has your heart, too," she said.
awww, just beautiful :) x

[mickey-sixx.livejournal.com]

My heart just exploded with the cute! :D Oh, this is beautiful.

[leighleighla.livejournal.com]

mrow. So cute. I <3. *hugs OT3...and Dennis*

[wendymr.livejournal.com]

*hugs Jack*

This must hurt like hell. And I hope it does become part of a longer piece, because he deserves to get some kind of resolution out of this.

What is lovely is the comfort offered by both the Doctor and Rose, each in their own trademark ways. I can completely visualise that scene in my head. Beautiful.

[phdelicious.livejournal.com]

*huggles Jack*

A lot of emotion packed into this little piece. I hope you do get the chance to expand it.

[sunstar77.livejournal.com]

Very sweet. I love your work.

[crimsonkitty88.livejournal.com]

EEEEE! So cute! Especially that last line.

[effulgent-girl.livejournal.com]

Aw, that last line was too sweet. I'm not a fan of OT3 either and I enjoyed this alot.

[tenchrys.livejournal.com]

Thank you, I really enjoyed that ... good drabbles are like hot chocolate on a cold, rainy day (like today)... leave you with a nice warm feeling all over. :) Now to ask the stupid question of the day but I can't figure out what OT3 or OTP stand for; ;could you please enlighten me? Ta! :)

[laurab1.livejournal.com]

Awww :)

[isolus-gurl.livejournal.com]

Nicely done!

[kaymares.livejournal.com]

My turn - Awww! *sniffle* Jack! (hugs Jack)
This was bittersweet and just, well, I want more. (Go figure!)
Please, please expand on this. I think it would be quite a time seeing Jack discover what happened in those 2 missing years.
Can't wait!

[bulky-monster.livejournal.com]

Aww! Supersweet :)

[inthegiggleloop.livejournal.com]

I've just read a few of your fics today and they are amazing. I just became a big OT3 fan after reading some stuff yesterday. Keep it up.

[mickeyk.livejournal.com]

Dennis noticed, and with Jack's trademark grin, opened the door for her. She blushed as she went through.

Rose smiled. "He has your heart, too," she said.

This, right here, is why I adore Jack (esp. S1 DW Jack, I think S1 TW Jack wasn't shown to have it nearly as much S2 TW Jack was much better). Gorgeous as hell, but also has a heart. Thanks for writing this and yes, I'd also like to read more (noticed your new long one but I'm going to wait until it's complete to read it).