*stands and cheers* I LOVED this ending! It's like a warm, fluffy blanket. :) You wrapped this up beautifully.
At last they broke apart again, gasping for air and holding onto each other as though they were drowning. The Doctor thought he might actually be doing so; drowning in the emotions he'd denied himself for—ever, really. He was lost at sea in the midst of an unfamiliar ocean of possibilities and emotional reefs, with nothing in sight to hide behind. It was amazing. It was terrifying.
You've got an amazing grip on emotions. You write them in a way that it's almost palpable for your reader.
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Date: 2007-11-06 11:41 pm (UTC)At last they broke apart again, gasping for air and holding onto each other as though they were drowning. The Doctor thought he might actually be doing so; drowning in the emotions he'd denied himself for—ever, really. He was lost at sea in the midst of an unfamiliar ocean of possibilities and emotional reefs, with nothing in sight to hide behind. It was amazing. It was terrifying.
You've got an amazing grip on emotions. You write them in a way that it's almost palpable for your reader.
Soooo...is it too soon to ask for a sequel? :D