I...can I have a chapter like this every morning? It beats the hell out of a cuppa joe.
*staggers off, dazed*
(Oh, I should probably leave slightly more substantive comment, eh? Well..it's a gorgeous fic. Beautifully written, beautifully characterized, and with an immediate, convincing sense of place. But that holds true for all of your stories. As well, I love that Tony's a character you get a feel for, even though he's off-screen; I love that you round Jackie out into more than a caricature. And I *adore* the thoughts and emotions you have TenII experiencing; I love that it's so *normal* for us--well, barring the sudden lack of an empathic link--but for him it's such a shock. Which is exactly as it *would* be.
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Date: 2008-12-24 01:38 pm (UTC)I...can I have a chapter like this every morning? It beats the hell out of a cuppa joe.
*staggers off, dazed*
(Oh, I should probably leave slightly more substantive comment, eh? Well..it's a gorgeous fic. Beautifully written, beautifully characterized, and with an immediate, convincing sense of place. But that holds true for all of your stories. As well, I love that Tony's a character you get a feel for, even though he's off-screen; I love that you round Jackie out into more than a caricature. And I *adore* the thoughts and emotions you have TenII experiencing; I love that it's so *normal* for us--well, barring the sudden lack of an empathic link--but for him it's such a shock. Which is exactly as it *would* be.
Just gorgeous. *hugs*!)