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"Underestimated"--Doctor Who (1/1)

Woot! First posting of a new fic in the fic journal!

Title: Underestimated (1/1)
Author: [livejournal.com profile] aibhinn
Word count: ~ 2700
Pairing: Ten/Rose (implied very strongly)
Rating: G
Spoilers: None from canon, though if you don't know the ending of The One Adventure He'll Never Have, you'll be spoiled for one of the big Reveals.
Summary: The Doctor's parenting skills are called into question when a social worker finds him and his child out in the park on a Monday morning. Pure fluff. A sequel of sorts to The One Adventure He'll Never Have.
Author's notes: Dedicated to [livejournal.com profile] bonnie8jo, whom I don't know from Adam, but whose suggestion sparked the bunny in the first place. :) Many kudos and lots of thanks to [livejournal.com profile] buckbeakbabie, [livejournal.com profile] zoanthropic06, [livejournal.com profile] joely_jo, and [livejournal.com profile] sensiblecat for beta reading—especially you, Ruth, for all the links about home-schooling in Britain. Thank you so much!



The Doctor stepped out the door of the house he and Rose had bought not long after the twins were born, and turned to hold out his hand to his six-year-old daughter. "Come along, half-pint. Let's go."

"I'm not a half-pint!" Thalia objected. She took hold of the doorknob and pulled the door shut behind her. "I've grown! Look!" She stood side-by-side to her father on the front step and placed her hand flat on top of her head, then moved it over toward him until it touched his belt. "See!" she said triumphantly. "I'm tall now!"

"So you are," the Doctor said with a smile. "I guess that means I can't call you half-pint any more. All right, tall Thalia, we've got the whole day together, just you and me. Where do you want to go?"

"The park!" Thalia said immediately, taking his hand.

"Are you sure?" he said doubtfully, but letting his eyes twinkle at her. "Because there's always the dentist."

"No, the park!" Thalia repeated, jumping a bit.

"Oh, all right." They started down the walk toward the pavement. "If you must. Though I think we should go to the dentist. They give you sugar-free sweets, you know. And you get to sit in that chair that goes up and down and lies back and sits up and—"

"Daddy," Thalia said in a long-suffering tone. "The dentist isn't fun."

"Fun? Who said anything about fun? This is work, my girl. If you're not a half-pint any more, then I'm afraid you're a grown-up, and that means no more fun for you. It's all washing up and mowing the grass and paying bills and watching telly. That's your life now. No more of this play stuff."

"You and Mummy were playing this morning," Thalia accused. "You were sword-fighting with spatulas."

"We were?" the Doctor said, astonished.

Thalia giggled. "I saw you!"

"No, no, no. Couldn't have been. Are you sure it was us? It might have been Uncle Jack and Auntie Gwen."

"Auntie Gwen doesn't have yellow hair," Thalia said firmly. "Mummy does. And you're skinnier than Uncle Jack. Besides, he talks funny."

The Doctor laughed. "I'll have to remember to tell him that," he said. "But the fact remains, if you're not a half-pint—"

"Oh, silly," Thalia said, sighing. "You can still call me half-pint, Daddy."

"I can, eh?"

"Yes. But you have to call me 'tall Thalia' sometimes, too. Because it rhymes."

He chuckled. "I can do that. What about Mummy? Does she have to call you 'tall Thalia' as well?"

"Of course not! She doesn't call me 'half-pint' ever. She just calls me 'sweetheart' and 'Thallie.' Except when I'm in trouble. Then I'm 'Thalia Rose.'" She looked up at him. "Why do mummies call their kids by both names when they're angry?"

"I don't know," the Doctor said, raising an eyebrow. "I hadn't thought of it before. Maybe we should ask Mum when she and Alex get home this evening."

"Okay." The playground came into sight, and she squealed, jumping up and down with both feet. "Can I run over there, Daddy?"

The Doctor looked around carefully. There was nothing but pavement and deserted houses between them and the park; nobody hanging round, and he had a clear view of the entire playground. "Go on," he said, releasing her hand. She squealed again and pelted for the swings, pigtails flying. He grinned indulgently and sauntered after her, hands in his trouser pockets. Much as he loved being with his family as a whole, he adored these chances to be one-on-one with each of his children. It was amazing to him how different the twins were, and yet how much like their parents.

Alex was like his mother in her quieter moments: focused, intent, and determined. When given a puzzle or a problem to work out, he'd sit down in a corner and work through it all by himself, silently. And yet, when he was out alone with one of his parents, Alex would happily babble on about the things he'd learned and what they were seeing and where they were going. All very intelligent babble, too; once he'd figured something out, he could tell you exactly how he'd done it and why. He wasn't about to venture a guess until he had it well-sorted, though.

Thalia, on the other hand, was more like her father's open, hearty, and fun-loving side; she could talk about anything, had the ability to charm the socks off everyone she met (though that was probably more Rose's influence than his, he thought), and worked her way through problems by talking through them. Not necessarily talking to someone else, either; he'd peeked in on her one time when she'd been taken to task for something and had been set her lessons alone in her room, and she was still talking her way through the steps of the problem, though there was nobody there to hear her. No doubt about it, she'd definitely inherited his gob.

The sound of a car door caught his attention. A woman in a business suit had got out of a dark blue Ford, clipboard in hand, and was walking purposefully toward the playground and his daughter. Concern seized him and he broke into a run. "Oi!" he called, catching the woman's attention.

She turned toward him, and the concerned expression on her face relaxed somewhat. "Are you her father?" she asked as he jogged up. She nodded toward Thalia, who was swinging, but watching the two of them closely.

"Yes," he said firmly, moving around her so he stood between her and Thalia.

"I'm from Children's Services, and I'm just going round neighbourhoods checking that children are where they should be. Why isn't she at school?"

"Ah," the Doctor said, floundering a bit. Rose had told him something like this might happen if they didn't register as home-schoolers with the LEA. He probably should have done that after all. Scratching at the back of his neck, he tried to remember what she'd told him to say. He couldn't exactly tell this stranger that having a part-alien child in an Earth school was asking for trouble, after all. "We, er, school them at home. Her and her brother, that is. Education Otherwise, and all that."

"I see." The woman pulled out a biro and began writing on her clipboard. "And her name—?"

The Doctor folded his arms across his chest, frowning. "I think you'd better show me some identification first," he said firmly.

"Oh! Of course." She reached into her handbag and brought out a business card. It read Sioned Morgan, social worker, City of Cardiff, Wales in both English and Welsh. "Now, her name, please? And yours?"

"This isn't identification," the Doctor said, holding it up between two fingers. "This is a business card. Anyone can have a whole batch of these printed up, on your very own computer even. I won't be giving out details about my daughter until I'm certain you are who you say you are. Shouldn't you have some sort of official badge or something from Children's Services?"

There was a muffled whump from behind them, and he turned to see Thalia coming up from a crouch—apparently she'd leapt off the swing in mid-flight. She came over to take her father's hand. "It's all right, Daddy," she said, smiling at the stranger. "She's telling the truth."

"She is, is she?" the Doctor said, surprised. "What makes you think so?"

Thalia tilted her head sideways and narrowed her eyes thoughtfully. "She's all in blue," she said at last. He could feel her mind nudging his gently, asking to be let in. Curious, he allowed her, and suddenly he could see what she saw: the strange woman was surrounded in a blue aura that nearly matched both her car and her suit.

He was dumbfounded—he'd never known Thalia could see anything out of the ordinary. Does blue mean she's telling the truth? he asked.

Of course, Thalia said, a flavour of surprise to her mind-voice. That's how I knew Alex was lying when he said he didn't know where my stegosaurus was. He went from blue to yellow.

Suddenly very, very glad that he and Rose had vowed never to lie to their children, even 'for their own good,' he said aloud, "So she is. Quite a pretty shade of blue, too. All right, Thalia, do you think we should tell her your full name?"

"Thalia Rose Tyler," she said proudly, smiling brightly up at Sioned. "And my brother is Alexander John Tyler. But you have to call us Thalia and Alex, because if you call us by our full names, it means we're in trouble."

"I'll remember that," Sioned said with a smile, writing. "And your name, sir—?"

"Dr John Tyler." Legally, that was true; Jack had got him all sorted with a legal name change, from John Smith to John Tyler. Rose had protested at first, but he'd managed to talk her round—not only did it give the whole family the same surname, but it would hopefully make it harder for anyone trying to search him out to find him, if they didn't know about the change.

"And are you a medical doctor?"

"Doctor of philosophy. Physics. It sounds a bit odd, that, doesn't it? Philosophy and physics. Though when you start getting into the areas of quantum mechanics, they're strangely closely related."

She didn't crack a smile. "Your wife's name? And your address?"

"Rose Tyler. We live at number 15 Short Lane, just there." He pointed down the street toward their house. Cooperate with Children's Services, that's what Rose had told him. It was far better to be thought an overprotective but harmless parent than someone who had something to hide.

"And your son, Alexander—where's he?"

"Alex," Thalia corrected. "He's out with Mum. It's their day."

"We take each of them out separately, once a week," the Doctor explained at Sioned's raised eyebrow. "This week I've got Thalia and my wife's got Alex; next week we'll swap." It still felt odd to say wife, but that was what Rose was, in essence. They might never have had the ceremony, but as she'd said once, they didn't need one.

"Clever," Sioned said approvingly, writing some more. "How old are you, Thalia?"

"We're six," she said.

Sioned frowned, looking up at the Doctor. "'We'? Are they twins?" He nodded, and she noted that down as well. "Excellent. Now, why did you choose to home educate your children?"

"Oh, well, you know," the Doctor said uncomfortably, glancing down at Thalia. "Tailor their lessons to their ability levels, no bullying worries, all that sort of thing. We always planned to teach them at home."

"We're too advanced for school," Thalia said brightly. "Mum says the teachers would tear their hair out and the other kids would be mean to us. So Mum and Dad teach us. Well, mostly Dad, but Mum too."

"Really?" Sioned smiled at her. "Are you here for a lesson, or is this just play time?"

"Oh, it's play time," Thalia told her seriously. "But the Greeks thought it was quite important to exercise your body along with your mind, so it's not really a waste. Daddy and I walked all the way here so he could get his exercise, and I play on the playground so I can get mine. It's more fun when there are other kids," she added, looking at the empty swings and slide a little wistfully before turning back. "But it's still fun like this. And today's for Daddy and me anyway, not for Daddy and me and other kids."

Sioned blinked, glancing at the Doctor, apparently a bit taken aback. The Doctor held his expression still, though he really wanted to beam brightly at his daughter.

The social worker turned back to Thalia. "What have you been learning, then, when you're at lessons?"

"Oh, lots of things," she said. "The Earth's surface isn't all one big solid plate. It's a lot of different plates, and they're floating around on the molten rock of the mantle like a bunch of rafts on a pond. And when the currents move them, they shift around and bump into each other and that's how mountains form. Not all mountains are volcanoes, you know."

"They're not?" Sioned said. She was smiling, but the Doctor could tell this was a little more than she'd expected from a six-year-old.

"Nope!" Thalia said excitedly. "The Himalayas were formed when India crashed into Asia, like two cars running into each other." She demonstrated a head-on collision with her hands. "Boom! And their bonnets get all crinkled up because of how hard they hit. That's what the rocks did. But the Apennines in Italy are volcanic, and that's why Mt Vesuvius and Mt Etna are always exploding."

"Are all mountains found at plate boundaries?" the Doctor asked, unable to stop himself. They'd been learning this for the past few days, and he wanted to see how well she'd retained her lessons.

"Yep," she said proudly. "All of them."

"Are you sure?" he asked raising his eyebrows.

Thalia looked at him, frowning. "Are you trying to trick me, or did I get it wrong?" she asked.

"I dunno," he said, shrugging. "Think back to yesterday. Did I teach you anything about any mountains that are right smack in the middle of a tectonic plate?"

She continued to frown at him. Grinning, he waved his hands and swung his hips like a hula dancer. Memory flashed in her eyes, and she said, "Hawaii!"

"Well done! Now, what's it called when a volcano forms in the middle of a plate?"

"A hot spot!" she said triumphantly. "The magma burns through the crust!"

He laughed and knelt down to hug her. "That's my clever girl! I knew you could remember." He glanced up at Sioned, who'd completely stopped writing and was staring at the two of them. "There you are. Basic geology. Of course, we do other things, too. Maths, for example." He looked back at Thalia. "Five times six."

"Thirty."

"Fourteen times three."

"Forty-two," she said, with a short pause to think.

"The square root of sixteen."

"Four." She gave him an exasperated look. "That's baby stuff, Daddy," she said, hand on her hip. "Anybody can do that."

"Oh, really?" he said with a smile. "All right, then, let's give you something a little harder. What's the absolute value of negative twelve?"

"Daddy." She rolled her eyes. "It's twelve. I learned that years ago."

"Th—that's algebra," Sioned said quietly. The Doctor glanced up; she'd gone pale, her eyes wide. "Absolute value—I learned that in algebra."

"Well, pre-algebra," the Doctor agreed. "Though how you lot get away with not teaching the properties of the number line until they're in secondary school, I'll never know. And if you're going to teach them that three times four is the same as four times three, why not teach them the name of the number property at the same time?"

"Commutative!" Thalia put in, beaming.

"That's right. Well done." He kissed his daughter on the forehead and rose, taking in the way Sioned stared. "Nothing amazing about it, honestly," he said cheerfully. "Just pushing boundaries a little, that's all. Don't worry, I won't be teaching her calculus for a good long while yet. Mostly I'm teaching things in a different order than the National Curriculum, not things that aren't in it at all." So far, he added mentally. When he started lessons on TARDIS piloting and fourth-dimensional physics, it would be different. That wouldn't be for a few years yet, though.

"I—I see," Sioned said shakily. She put her pen away. "Erm—I don't think I need to finish this report. It's clear to me that you're not neglecting her education in any way. Thank you so much, Dr Tyler—good day. Goodbye, Thalia." Without waiting for an answer, she hurried to her car and drove away.

Thalia watched the car disappear, a pensive expression on her face. The Doctor was struck by how much she suddenly resembled Rose. "Did she leave so fast because we're from Gallifrey, Daddy?" she asked softly.

The Doctor frowned at the sadness in her voice and knelt again to look Thalia in the eye. "No, half-pint," he said earnestly. "It's because she underestimated you. Most children in this time are underestimated, even if they're fully human. She wasn't upset with you; she was upset with herself."

"Are you sure?" she asked. Her eyes were very wide, and he could see the beginnings of hurt in them. It broke his heart.

"I'm completely sure." He pulled her into a hug and kissed her, then rose to his feet with her in his arms. "What do you say we forget the park today?" he said, trying to keep his tone light. "We could go to the cinema."

She brightened, wrapping her legs around his waist and her arms around his neck. "Could we see the one with the dragons and the fairies? I want to see that one."

"We certainly can, if that's what you want." He started off toward the pavement again, holding his daughter securely. "It's a long one, though."

"Two hours and thirty-three minutes," she said. "That's what Mum told me. But I know how long two hours and thirty-three minutes is, and I can sit still if there are dragons and fairies."

He smiled at her. "Me too," he agreed.

[identity profile] lysanderpuck.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 06:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't usually read Doctor Who fic, and I haven't read the prequel to this, but this was adorable.

Excellent one-shot. I'm still going 'awwww'.

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Yes, when the suggestion was made, the fic popped fully-formed into my brain and absolutely would not leave me alone until I had it written.

Love your username, btw--that's one of my favorite plays!

[identity profile] lyricalviolet.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
This is awfully cute. Thank you for directing me this way. You're going to write more of them, right? This whole AU you've created is lovely.

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Got a few more ideas, yeah. Just be careful of the cavities from the fluff. *g*

Thank you!

[identity profile] superherogrlcat.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 06:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww! Thalia's adorable! ^^

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Isn't she? Her personality is based loosely on my niece (who's now 24). She was just a hoot to write. :)

Thanks for reviewing!

[identity profile] spastasmagoria.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
utterly adorable. Great followup to your previous fic, which I also thoroughly enjoyed. Good to see how the lot of thm are getting along.

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm discovering these children are taking over my brain, and so I'm going to *have* to write more. It's sort of like having Yakko, Wakko, and Dot in my head, I think. *g*

Thanks for reviewing!

[identity profile] ramblinsuze.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is so sweet! I love how the Doctor is with his daughter and Thalia's mixture of rambunctious child and amazing intelligence. Love it!

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Yes, this is the ultimate adventure for him--shaping someone else's life and watching them become the best they could be. He's having an utter blast doing it, too. (I think he's better at domestic than he wants us to believe--shhh!)

Thanks for reviewing!

[identity profile] andromeda05.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 06:56 pm (UTC)(link)
In the words of my favorite Doc that was fantastic! Ooh she's cute and so is he as a father! Uncle Jack and Aunt Gwen that was perfect! Thank you for sharing...though I'd like to see the spatula fight as well but that's just me :)

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehehe... I got this image of Rose at the cooker, spinning round with the spatula in her hand and brandishing it at him, saying, "En garde!" The Doctor ducks behind her, whips another spatula out of the container on the countertop, and the two fight back-and-forth through the kitchen, with the kids at the table egging them on. :D

God, I'm bad. :D But thank you for the review!

[identity profile] kesomon.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Daw-haw-hawwwwww. That was so flipping CUTE it made my eyes bleed. They pwned the social worker. XD

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! And I'm a teacher, so usually I'm on the social worker's side, but this can't have been anything she's ever seen before. Poor lady. :D

[identity profile] wiccagirl24.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Squee!

This was lovely! The little details, like the Doctor changing his name, taking Rose's, were so perfect. Thalia has a personality of her own that is uniquly hers, but a nice blend of her parents too.

I hope it's true when you said that you weren't done with this verse. I would die to see Jack and Gwen visit the fam, or babysit the kids.

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, nowhere near done. The whole lot of them have moved into my head. Though I must admit, they have a nice sofa.... *g*

So glad you enjoyed it!

[identity profile] wiccagal-1996.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 07:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, sweetness this is lovely.
I'm hopinh that you'll decide to write, not a whole set of consecutive fics, but little ones,like this. You know, ones that map out a bit of the kids lives growing up and ones that show a few random events.
I can't believe how fuzzy,warm this made me,lol.
x

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:25 pm (UTC)(link)
That's actually what I had in mind--little one-shots here and there. For example: Can you imagine the Doctor when Thalia goes on her first date? Or Alex flunking the science fair he enters because his project is so advanced his judge is convinced he cheated? Or--OMG--Rose teaching him to drive. The Doctor, that is.

See? The bunnies are endless! :D

(BTW, icon love!)

[identity profile] binah1013.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 07:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahh, that was a sweet tale. Are they actually living on Earth?

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, they are! It's canon that time-traveling with children i iffy--it messes up their development. So once they got back across the Void, they were VERY careful never to travel in time while Rose was pregnant or with the children on board. So they bought a house so the kids could have as 'normal' a childhood as possible--not even Gallifreyan children were brought up on a TARDIS.

So glad you enjoyed the story--thank you for the review!

[identity profile] mickat24.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww! So cute!

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
:D Thank you! The bunny set up residence in my brain and wouldn't budge til I got it written. Glad you enjoyed it!

[identity profile] swankkat.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 08:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww~ What a sweet little glimpse into the Doctor as a daddy. He's indulgent without being simpering - makes me wish all dads in the world were as patient and proud of their children. And I feel slightly sorry for Sioned - she clearly didn't know what she was getting into!

I'd love to see more snippets from this universe, if you decide to do so. :)

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:29 pm (UTC)(link)
"Indulgent without being simpering"--yes, he loves watching his kids develop into their own personalities, but never talks down to them. It's a fine line to cross, even as a teacher. :)

Thanks so much for the review! And yes, expect more from this universe--they just won't leave me alone!

[identity profile] aftersky.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
*has melted into loved-up goo*

Yeys!

Loved it! :D Thanks for showing me the way here!

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, you're welcome--so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

[identity profile] misssara11.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved this (and I don't know if I mentioned before, I adored The One Adventure, I read it straight through one day). I hope to see more from this universe (Alex promised us they were very randy!).

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee--so they are. Hm, I do have a happy!Who prompt table... *ponders*

Thanks for reviewing!
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[identity profile] midasu.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 10:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely. I hope that you are going to do more one-shots for this universe.

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Got a few more in mind. This lot won't leave me alone! *g*

Thanks for reviewing!

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[identity profile] brienze.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm usually not fond of fics where children are children (adult Alex was fine by me), but this is adorable. Love the picture we get of how the Doctor is educating the twins, and how he and Thalia almost but not entirely clueless about how they're presenting themselves to the social worker. And the bit at the end, about the time of the movie and sitting still for it, is a great blend of what it must be like to be a 6 year old future Time Lady. =)

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:32 pm (UTC)(link)
And the bit at the end, about the time of the movie and sitting still for it, is a great blend of what it must be like to be a 6 year old future Time Lady.

Yes! This is what I really want to explore. What does it feel like to have a sense of what time is, but no words for it? And what does it feel like when you finally start to put words to the feelings inside you? When you truly understand exactly what two hours and thirty-three minutes is? Not sure how I'll go about it, but it's a fascinating thing to contemplate. SO glad you picked up on it!! :D

Thanks for reviewing!

[identity profile] nyc-iby.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, that was delighfully sweet! You really should write an Alex/Rose fic, just to round it off!

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! I might just have to. :) Thank you!

[identity profile] timeispassing.livejournal.com 2007-01-15 11:55 pm (UTC)(link)
That was ADORABLE!! Please write more! Please please PLEASE!! :D

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, you can pretty much bet on it. LOTS o' bunnies at this point. :)

Thanks for reviewing!

[identity profile] kb91.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
I lucked out because I came across "The One Adventure" just as you were finishing it, so I was able to read it all at once this past weekend. I was all ready to post and tell you how much I loved it when I saw this sequel. I went from feeling lucky to completely over the moon. :D

I can't tell you how much I'm loving this universe. The original is one of those stories that sticks with you -- it might make me a squeeing fangirl, but thinking of them like this always makes me ridiculously happy. (Something I really needed after seeing "The Runaway Bride" a couple weeks ago ... sad Doctor, no Rose, sob!)

Please add my name to the list of people who hope you'll continue to give us glimpses into this universe. I absolutely adore it. (And I'm having a ball tracking down the rest of your stories on Teaspoon to catch up with the rest of your work. Thank you for sharing it with us!)

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, you're so very kind. Thank you! :)

[identity profile] altorogue.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
*melts*

What a kid. The Doctor would be the most awesome teacher ever- such boundless enthusiasm! I love how they're homeschooling the kids. It's lovely to see other things from this universe!

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you! Yes, can't you just imagine him playing around with the manipulatives? Or having his kids stand on stools with little mini lab coats and goggles, doing chemistry experiments? (This is why I can't leave this world alone. Too much fun!)

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[identity profile] leighleighla.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
Cute like whoa. I loved it!

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you so much! :)

Okay...

[identity profile] badonkatonks.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
You've been asking me to review and I've been avoiding it because I wanted to digest, yes, digest, all of TOA. I have to admit, it spans a great deal of information and I have found myself absorbing it, so now I'm supersaturated, you could say, like a glass of iced tea made the Southern right way.

You've done a wonderful job creating a mythology within the Doctor Who spectrum of fanfics. What I really like about it is how the character's personal timelines cross each other's, in spite of this occurrence being a big Time Lord Taboo-No-No.

I fought it, your fic, that is. I kept arguing with myself. Too domestic, too domestic, I kept insisting. Until about a quarter of the way through TOA, when I realized, god-damnit, Lissa, I'm fucking hooked!

Your Doctor is crack and his kids are crack and I find myself looking for a pipe and a lighter...not in the crack!fic sort of way but in the addiction sort of way.

Then this little fic...Hawaii was a nice touch...made me want to see Ten in a grass skirt and coconut bra, which I think is very possible...

You say you're going to continue writing in this universe you've created. I would very much like to see Ten's actions/reactions when things go wrong with the parenting thing. He knows so much...but not everything. You need to write a fic in which Thalia has a massive temper tantrum in a very public place, like the market, or a crowded restaurant...with only Daddy there to discipline her. It's easy, the parenting (and perhaps the teaching) thing when the child is having good-to-perfect behavior, but what would Ten do if his daughter is lying in the middle of the cereal aisle at the market, screaming because she wants something and Daddy told her 'No.'?

Now THAT, I'd like to see...lol.

You've done a wonderful job, Lissa, you really have.

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[identity profile] badonkatonks.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
Damn it...I forgot to tell you what I originally set out to tell you!

TOA and how you've set this universe up reminds me of a fanfic universe created by Mary Borsellenio ([livejournal.com profile] monkeycrackmary) in the Lord of the Rings fandom a few years back.

It's called Pretty Good Year (http://muse.inkstigmata.net/prettygoodyear.html) and it's all about what happened the year that Sam and Rosie lived at Bag End with Frodo. Pure fluff, angst, and speculation, but PGY garnered an almost cult-like following of readers and eventually writers. Go check it out...you'll see what I mean. ;-)

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[identity profile] rebelsaint.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 03:01 am (UTC)(link)
You rock my socks.

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed it!

[identity profile] larielromeniel.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 05:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, the fun you can have with this universe!

Adorable and just what I need right now. :-) Much love, sweetie!

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Entirely too much fun with this universe! *grin*

**hugs** take care, hon. I'm home from work today; feel free to call if you want/need. (Use the house phone; I think I left my cell in the car.)

[identity profile] calico-fox.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 03:39 pm (UTC)(link)
AWWWWWW! I loved the sequal to this, and I just adore this! So cute ^^ Thalia is so adorable!

[identity profile] aibhinn.livejournal.com 2007-01-16 04:04 pm (UTC)(link)
:D thank you! Yes, she's fun to write. So glad you enjoyed the fic!

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